Name of person giving feed back: Liam Biglin
Overall assessment of blog: The blog is very good an contains most things asked for in class, to improve I would suggest adding your own things to help it stand out and become more individual to you. For example, more videos of bands you like.
Strengths of front cover: Your front cover contains most conventions of a music magazine front coves, such as the Masthead, headline, sell lines etc. There is also a continuing color scheme which helps it become create realism.
Areas for development: Use a mid shot for the front cover.
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