final draft of double page spread

third draft of double page spread

second double page spread draft

logo for the band I've chosen

This is a quick mock up of a logo that I will use in my double page spread to put above the band photo. I got the idea from an example of a double page spread in a media class room in college.

DOUBLE PAGE DRAFT FIRST DRAFT

edited contents page

teacher feedback

Peer Feedback on Contents page

Title fonts work well with the genre. Bold colours add greatly to emphasize the mood. The live images give some energy to the page.

No real improvements needed to be made

Luke Hallett
good use of images
the boxes around the text make it easy to read
the text is spread out well
the red colored text used on the page numbers are quite difficult to read. a white colored text may be more clear